Comments on: 3. Peepsite

By: Klaflefalumpf

Klaflefalumpf — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 16:54:07 +0000

It’s scary just how much of that story I can associate with… particularly the not understand why I was in trouble constantly part.
The character describes me fairly accurately throughout my school career minus the twitches and kung-fu business.
You seem to have a good understanding of what’s going through his head too (and quite often mine), a fantastic read even if it did result in some unpleasant flashbacks.

By: Ade

Ade — Tue, 30 Oct 2007 00:59:34 +0000

I still see that talent from the White Dwarf series peeking through. There are images in this story that work very well, but there are lapses. You know what I’m talking about, of course. How much revision do you do?
Either way, you’ve got Rule #1 down – Keep the pen moving. I think this new series could be going somewhere…

By: waitress13

waitress13 — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 19:57:47 +0000

oh my god you’re back- thank you!

By: Johnny

Johnny — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 14:07:08 +0000

Outstanding character development. I was periodically and randomly attacked in grade school by kids like Peepsite. Now, I know what they were thinking. I also went to school with a family named Snodgrass. You nailed that one too. Looking forward to more.

By: Matt

Matt — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 11:40:20 +0000

Very cool, I can see a lot of myself in Peepsite. Just wondering though, are you going to keep doing a new post on different people, and are they eventually going to meet up or intertwine stories?
wm: sorry, man, not gonna answer questions about the direction of the story.

By: Christi Lee

Christi Lee — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 00:12:13 +0000

Peepsite and I would have been best friends. I loved this post. It made me angry.

By: Wayland

Wayland — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 21:47:46 +0000

Cool. Very emotionally charged. I liked that.