http://www.clusterlizard.net/under_the_sun/the-guardian-angel I love how you go right to the very edge... and then just jump right over it Mon, 19 Jul 2010 21:03:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://www.clusterlizard.net/under_the_sun/the-guardian-angel/comment-page-1#comment-1235 JuXtaposed Fri, 09 Nov 2007 21:13:52 +0000 http://www.clusterlizard.net/curiosities/the-guardian-angel#comment-1235 Throughout this story, your writing has seemed more simplistic, and your themes have seemed more cliche. Having said that, I'm still loving the new stuff. It just goes to show that you're a fantastic storyteller; you can take popular themes, write them simply, and still tell a compelling story. Keep up the good work! Throughout this story, your writing has seemed more simplistic, and your themes have seemed more cliche.
Having said that, I’m still loving the new stuff. It just goes to show that you’re a fantastic storyteller; you can take popular themes, write them simply, and still tell a compelling story.
Keep up the good work!

]]> http://www.clusterlizard.net/under_the_sun/the-guardian-angel/comment-page-1#comment-1234 Christi Lee Fri, 09 Nov 2007 17:07:51 +0000 http://www.clusterlizard.net/curiosities/the-guardian-angel#comment-1234 Good. Good.

]]> http://www.clusterlizard.net/under_the_sun/the-guardian-angel/comment-page-1#comment-1233 me Fri, 09 Nov 2007 16:36:46 +0000 http://www.clusterlizard.net/curiosities/the-guardian-angel#comment-1233 Shouldn't it say "guardian," not "gaurdian." Also, I think the last line should say "suspended for a month" rather than "expelled." Either way, keep up the good work, I enjoy the stories. wm: Oops... thanks! Shouldn’t it say “guardian,” not “gaurdian.” Also, I think the last line should say “suspended for a month” rather than “expelled.” Either way, keep up the good work, I enjoy the stories.
wm: Oops… thanks!

]]> http://www.clusterlizard.net/under_the_sun/the-guardian-angel/comment-page-1#comment-1232 Wayland Fri, 09 Nov 2007 08:33:52 +0000 http://www.clusterlizard.net/curiosities/the-guardian-angel#comment-1232 I think Peepsite is my hero. You gonna kill him off in a sad fashion or what?! That would be perfectly sad. Hmm... I think I'm getting ahead of myself and you. : ) I think Peepsite is my hero. You gonna kill him off in a sad fashion or what?! That would be perfectly sad. Hmm… I think I’m getting ahead of myself and you. : )

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