Comments on: 3. The Day Off

By: david t

david t — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 10:30:22 +0000

man, i grew up in raytown (kc area) and i can see a lot of myself and my friends in these writings. great style man. down to earth, unpretentious, and entertaining in its truthfulness. i agree with whoever wrote that the more of these you read, the better they get.
looking forward to reading the rest of it.

By: Josh

Josh — Fri, 15 Dec 2006 05:29:48 +0000

Hey man your stuff is impressive, keep it up.
It only took 3 stories and about 20 minutes to get genuinely interested in your life. It’s crazy how similar some of us really are even if we come from such different places…

By: Archie Meaties

Archie Meaties — Thu, 07 Sep 2006 20:44:09 +0000

Awesome stuff D.Monkey. Can’t get enough.
Come now, “Chris”. Why do you want to sound like a real dicknuts with the whole, “it rings false with the off-the-shelf imagery of an expert writer, such as myself, who should be judo chopped in the cash and prizes”? People like you make me want to throw daggers. Nunce.

By: cory

cory — Mon, 21 Aug 2006 19:07:42 +0000

so far everystory iv read of yours has some anonymous person calling you a loser. i find this funny that somone who cant even come up with 3 decent sylobals can call somone who writes as well as you do a loser. great story man keep it up

By: Chris

Chris — Thu, 17 Aug 2006 22:38:28 +0000

The stories are entertaining enough, I suppose. It rings false though. He uses too many off-the-shelf stereotypes to describe the “white trash” world and its denizens. I call Bullshit.

By: lohans_rack

lohans_rack — Wed, 09 Aug 2006 23:16:28 +0000

dude, buy a fucking pipe. please.

By: anonymous

anonymous — Wed, 09 Aug 2006 01:51:32 +0000

I am a “smart person”- or at least I go to one of the top fifty high schools in the state, and I’d like to say that I really enjoy and appreciate your stories. Although my situation is different, I deal with similiar mindless authorities, and probably a lot more boredom. I’ve had to deal with it in similiar ways. Thanks for your work and inspiration, and keep it up.

By: Ninjapunk

Ninjapunk — Mon, 07 Aug 2006 21:53:43 +0000

I agree completely with Mr. arrested development fan. It’s great to see someone who isn’t trying to be smart, and just entertaining us with great everyday kind of stories in a calm, down to earth style.
I’m not a stupid person, and I read pretty much every site on FA, but a man’s got a right to do whatever the fuck he wants, and I like to read your stories, and you obviously like writing them.
Fuck pretentions man, you do a great job.

By: david

david — Sun, 06 Aug 2006 02:47:25 +0000

I’m writing from hungary, but I must say that I’m impressed with your style of writing. Not because it is particularly technical, but rather because it portrays a lifestyle that is very common to where I live. Thanks very much for the work, and disregard the idiots who come from the tucker max site, and see all things in black and white. Writing isn’t about comparison, it’s about your own life and experiences. Anonymous posters would do well to remind themselves of that.

By: arrested development fan

arrested development fan — Sat, 05 Aug 2006 16:19:07 +0000

so when do buster, gob, and lindsay start making into these stories?