Comments on: 11. Predators

By: FruitThief

FruitThief — Mon, 11 Dec 2006 23:10:30 +0000

“He was a hippie gone mad – thrust into the high-stakes world of gas-station management.”
Fucking. Pricless.

By: zach

zach — Wed, 06 Sep 2006 00:39:24 +0000

its not fiction…jackass?

By: NiteShok

NiteShok — Tue, 05 Sep 2006 15:48:26 +0000

Filler in fiction? Really? Jackass.
Keep it up.

By: Zachary Swezy

Zachary Swezy — Sat, 02 Sep 2006 06:17:28 +0000

this is filler

By: Johnny C

Johnny C — Sat, 02 Sep 2006 03:59:10 +0000

Hey DevilMonkey,
I really like your writing. I check this page more than any of the others (and it doesn’t hurt that you update frequently, too). You do a very good job of communicating experiences and personalities – it makes me feel like I am a fly on the wall, reading your mind as these events unfold.
I assume these stories are true and not short-fiction pieces. Every time I read about Shafto getting under your skin I wish there was some way I could tell past-you how wrong he is and how you shouldn’t believe him. I hate seeing you fall deeper into the opiates, but what’s done is done… I guess it makes for good writing.
I laughed when you told Josh that coke would fuck him up.
Keep it up, dude.

By: Mandi

Mandi — Fri, 01 Sep 2006 19:38:33 +0000

Oh my goodness, I need more!
Your writing is great. I love reading these kind of stories…I feel almost like I’m there watching it all happen. Thanks :)

By: Ich

Ich — Fri, 01 Sep 2006 06:54:11 +0000

The PCjr dates this to around 1984-86.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/PCjr

By: Donald

Donald — Fri, 01 Sep 2006 03:31:43 +0000

Wow, thatś pretty crazy. Itś almost like one of those bad soap operas. But in a good way. I reeeally hope that makes sense to someone who isn me. Anyways, great stuff.

By: Sean

Sean — Thu, 31 Aug 2006 17:39:50 +0000

The median you have now between comedic posts or elements mixed with the seriousness is just absolutely perfect. Keep the updates coming.

By: Jord@n

Jord@n — Thu, 31 Aug 2006 05:55:05 +0000

Great story, keep ‘em coming!